What do you mean, "​the first ​machine that ​can purify ​dirty water ​into clean ​drinking water ​within minutes. "?  And what is "dirty".  This kind of codswallop really needs to be edited out if a regular newsletter is to maintain any credibility.

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What do you mean, "​the first ​machine that ​can purify ​dirty water ​into clean ​drinking water ​within minutes. "?  And what is "dirty".  This kind of codswallop really needs to be edited out if a regular newsletter is to maintain any credibility.   

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thanks for the comment David, my editing over the holidays a little slack. You are welcome to become an editor! ; ) let me know if you have interest. We give select members editorial rights, seems you are the only one that caught this. It has since been modified. 

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